Oceanside

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By Dawne Zacharias 
                    
                Walking on the sands towards
                            the oceans beckoning call                                 
                         blue sky with soft white clouds overhead
                             waves reaching out on the shoreline
                                    seagulls curious, fly close by
                                waves climax into foam formations
                        shades of aquamarine, blue and green 
                      I close my eyes and feel the spray
                            from the tumbling waves before me
                          the Sun's healing rays restores my soul,                                           
                                     I am whole again.

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Marc O'Brien

Date: 9/23/2019 3:19:00 PM

Very warm and soothing sentiments

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/21/2019 2:27:00 AM

Dawne, you are not only a praying woman, you understand the power of nature, meditation, and the sun. I always say the SON is in the sun. Wonderfully done, my friend. Your imagery is terrific!

Douglas Pederson

Date: 5/18/2019 2:59:00 AM

the imagery and photo is just beautiful. the ocean is one of my fav places to be and enjoy nature.