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Ocean's Body - Rondelet

Ocean's body old footprints gone before I come Ocean's body with flower's toss, overgrowing, old footprints gone before I come — the fall of the tide falls in love Ocean's body

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Date: 7/20/2025 10:54:00 PM
Like a live song for the ocean. I quite like this one.
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Date: 7/20/2025 4:59:00 AM
Dear Paige, Your rondelet is hauntingly beautiful and a poem that feels like standing at the shoreline, watching time erase and renew itself with every wave. I love how the refrain of “Ocean’s body” becomes both anchoring and mysterious, just like the sea itself: ever-present, immeasurable, containing both memory and forgetfulness. Summer Blessings, My Dear Paige, Daniel
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Date: 7/20/2025 12:18:00 AM
okay, i'm sold ! so bouyant and yet deep, paige...take a bow!
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Date: 7/19/2025 6:53:00 PM
Poems of the ocean always move me. The flow of your poem was as smoot as a rolling wave. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/19/2025 4:32:00 PM
this poem is simply exquisite. Faving
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Date: 7/19/2025 3:02:00 PM
I forget what is the rondelet, but i'm sure you've looked up its rule to make this jewel ~ Love it!
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