Oceanic Sabbath

We have no sabbath sense
deep enough
wet enough
searching baptismally enough
for Earth's oceanic atmosphere.

Sabbath is for monotheistic cities
and castled lands 
we anthro-supremacist share 
to weekday busyness hold them
six weakly orthodox dry days per week

On lands we sell ourselves 
to uneasily rest 
deeply contest 
land-based sixes 
and sacred sevens

Crowding human over-splattered population
huddling beneath self-mattered desecrated sabbaths
longing to land-based rabid breed 
deeper nourished oceanic sacramentals
higher flourished seasoned ornamentals.

Over these past several seasick years
Sunday crawls back toward Atlantic's western shore,
border stretch of dry as lustless dust 
then wet love-drenched sand
leading out to ocean's deep sustaining 
Atlantis-Pacific round wet sabbath

Populated more and more 
by all-consuming human barging desecration,
I notice my slowly growing urge
to run then walk then swim to float away
from continental fractured unrest

Compelled to seek a cooler wetter nest
where sabbaths still speak sea-psalm gullibly
in bygone blissful birdsongs
swaying surging suds 
of soulfully submerging 
saliently surfing 
salty sacramental tears
reviving EarthPacific SunDays.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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