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Ocean Waves

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Psalm 93:4 The LORD on high is mightier than the noise of many waters, yea, than the mighty waves of the sea. January 28, 2019 4th place, "Ocean Waves Haiku" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 1/28/2019.

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Date: 1/30/2019 6:49:00 PM
I really like this one and that internal rhyme in line one. Congrats, Beata.
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:49:00 PM
I should say "assonance" not rhyme!
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Date: 1/29/2019 8:17:00 AM
- I'm back with congratulations, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:51:00 PM
Lovely Beata, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:36:00 PM
Well done, Beata.
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:33:00 AM
Beata, very nice ~
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:39:00 AM
Beautifully done, as usual, my friend.
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:33:00 AM
- Lovely written, Beata :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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