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Ocean Swimmers' Fear - Footle

Big bite Great white *Entry for Brian's footle challenge

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/12/2012 8:44:00 AM

A great footle here Carolyn!Enjoyed again:)))

Don Johnson

Date: 5/26/2011 4:18:00 AM

Great white shark , more bite than bark, in bloody south Australia Guys get eat ...or chewed and yet go back in the water??? great verse babe...love Don

Derrick Burton

Date: 5/24/2011 12:32:00 PM

Enjoyed this poetry today. Have a great one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's Footle contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2011 12:49:00 PM

Creative work..I am watching a report or documentary about Bull Sharks being in fresh water..Scary..Congratulations..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 5/22/2011 9:16:00 AM

A pleasure Carolyn! Great To see you at the top, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored second place. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 5/22/2011 8:13:00 AM

Congrats Carolyn on your 2nd place win in the contest.Enjoyed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 12:57:00 AM

Way to go, Carolyn. I see you won. I am curious about something. I am seeing some of these with the word footle written next to them. WAs that part of the requirement to win? I feel disappointed if I lost for that reason!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/21/2011 4:54:00 PM

Good night! what a write! congratulations to you Carolyn. It's a natural! great win

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2011 10:15:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian strand, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/21/2011 7:49:00 AM

Perfect! should have known youd go the fish route...lol. BG

Cory Long

Date: 5/19/2011 9:37:00 AM

that's for sure, nicely done! cory

Robert Ball

Date: 5/19/2011 8:16:00 AM

Gee carol that was short and good as usual, thank you for being their as always, anyway how is your health any better? I am going on a radio station on Sunday to plug my second book, the person that runs the show is a personal friend and she is a great Christian lady, Her show is called Food for Thought and it is the same name as my book, The Lord works in strange ways, anyhow I will plug poetry soup and it's members, can I mention you? If it's all right. God bless

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/19/2011 7:19:00 AM

funny work!! I like those footles give me the giggles like footsies. hehe

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/19/2011 6:02:00 AM

how much more succinct can one get! :) An excellent entry, Carolyn. Got my vote!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/19/2011 3:53:00 AM

Yes it is a great fear for ocean swimmers indeed.Excellent wite here.Best wishes. Come to my page Carolyn.

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/19/2011 1:34:00 AM

Love it, Carolyn.. All the best for the contest.. love Wilma

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/18/2011 11:28:00 PM

Well done with the footle, Carolyn! Good luck in the contest. Caroline.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/18/2011 7:24:00 PM

With more and more sightings of sharks in unprecedented areas, this footle rings true. Very fun too. Wishing you the best health and answers to all of the questions you need answered with your health. You are such an important part of this poetry community, Carolyn. I can only imagine how much your friends with real body features love u too! ha ha. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2011 6:49:00 PM

Thanks for the alert. I have corrected the footle, Carolyn. Thanks for letting me know about your visit to the doctor, My prayers for your speedy recovery if any

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 5/18/2011 4:24:00 PM

'Nuff Said Night Nite! PERFECT! Reminds me of the scene in Indiana Jones when the showy Judo dude wants to beat "the you know what" out of Indy. The villain, upon finishing his fancy display of moves, is simply shot to death by a single effortless pull of the trigger from an unimpressed Harrison Ford! Don't ask me why and where the connection!?! I suppose it's the easy obvious choice of the whole death scene thinga ma Jig! or something!?? dunno? :) ~JSLambert

Diane Locksley

Date: 5/18/2011 3:49:00 PM

Look out for Jaws when you take your fishing trip Carolyn. I want to give this footle thing a try. Good luck in Brian's contest. Best to you, Diane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/18/2011 3:29:00 PM

Great one!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2011 1:27:00 PM

Wonderful thought conveyed , carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 5/18/2011 12:55:00 PM

wished i had the time to enter these contest, but just posting my poems and reading other poems on soup takes about most of my time and thinking, but will think about this contest. this was a great piece you wrote here enjoyed it, i am glad i don't have to judge these contest. thank you for commenting on Then Came the Rains.