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Ocean Eyes

I can see the strength of your devotion,             in your shoreline of emotion- your grace brings such healing,   and oh, those eyes as deep as the ocean.           Freeing from all the dry and deserted land, now only pebbles on a shore can understand-   I see the crystalline moments you hold...                       in those eyes as golden as the sand. February 3, 2018

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Date: 2/8/2018 3:10:00 AM
Beautiful and has inspired me, you'll see! I hasten to add apart from the ocean, not really connected but inspired me, thank you Laura! :-)
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Date: 2/8/2018 5:52:00 AM
awww thank you Mick! I just read it, I appreciate such kindness and happy you were inspired by my poem, you indeed have such a way with words. :)-luloo
Date: 2/4/2018 1:12:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Laura. Love it.
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Date: 2/8/2018 5:51:00 AM
many thanks sweet Line :)-luloo
Date: 2/3/2018 11:46:00 AM
Very romantic, Laura. I am certain if he's with you, those crystalline moments he's holding are priceless.
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Date: 2/8/2018 5:51:00 AM
thank you DT :) -luloo

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