Paghunda Zahid Poet Free verse

Ocean Eyes

Walking all night
On the glittering wet sand of a sea shore.. 
In the shadows of twinkling stars..
Through a silver airial fabric
of a tiny waning Moonlight 

Till the sun begin to rise
fom within the lap of distant crimson waves..
And gently start ascending to the magical sky...
With scattered purple clouds... 

For this spectacular sight
Ocean halts and transforms to mirror
To wholly reflect the colours of Dawn
From its redish wine waves... 

Wow, his view is like a pupil on the blue
Sun Ball far away on the horizon
Sea acts like the lower lash
While the sky like the upper one
With the magic of tiny pieces of hued clouds

Sublime!!
Perhaps a glimpse of big bang...
Or a corner of heaVen... 

Eternity in every moment..! 

 (12-21 2020)

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Christina Bowring January 25, 2024 at 11:11 PM Thought I would visit one of your older posted poems dear Paghunda and I’m glad I did. This is a beauty! It’s so alive with wondrous imagery full of colourful, creative imagination. Breathtaking scenes ‘ glittering wet sand’ ‘ crimson waves’ ‘ reddish wine waves’. So creative and captivating. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :):) Paghunda Zahid January 26, 2024 at 5:48 AM I am delighted and humbled by your kind remarks Bowring. I am happy that you liked and enjoyed this poem. Thank you so much. Stay blessed

Paula Goldsmith January 31, 2023 at 11:25 AM A lovely write. I did one on eyes. It was called "God's Eyes" Date Written: 1/20/2022. I love walking the beach. It has been a few years since I did it. Have a blessed day writing away.............. Paghunda Zahid January 26, 2024 at 5:46 AM Thanks Paula.

Afzal Nusker August 8, 2022 at 3:30 AM This is a gorgeous poem with such vivid imagery as if I'm watching it happening in front of me. Paghunda Zahid August 27, 2022 at 4:42 PM That's awesome... Thank you.. Means alot

Connie Marcum Wong May 23, 2022 at 7:26 AM This is very lovely. Superb imagery! Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo Paghunda Zahid July 15, 2022 at 10:44 AM Thank you wong

Brian Sambourne July 17, 2021 at 2:21 PM Stellar lines like "..scattered colored clouds" and "..red wine waves" give poetry its resonance. Beautiful work. Congratulations! Sincerely, Brian Paghunda Zahid July 22, 2021 at 12:35 PM Thanks :)

Susan Lawrence May 4, 2021 at 10:14 AM Absolutely beautiful... I flowed with the images and the emotions . Ocean halts and transforms to mirror . Love this ! Belated Congratulations on your win. All the best , Susan Paghunda Zahid May 4, 2021 at 11:31 AM Thank you Susan

Robert Pettit February 24, 2021 at 4:26 AM Quality descriptiveness all the way through. Paghunda Zahid May 4, 2021 at 11:30 AM Thanks

Jennifer Proxenos February 13, 2021 at 3:00 AM I love your chosen phrases and the way you wrote this poem my friend - yes, scenes as you describe helps us visualize that eternity is in every moment of this awesome poem you wrote, a gem my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Paghunda Zahid February 14, 2021 at 3:39 AM Thank you for being here sweet Jennifer, I missed you Jennifer Proxenos February 13, 2021 at 3:02 AM Congratulations on you win my friend, love, Jenny.

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2021 at 2:18 PM An absolute beauty this is. So descriptive, and also a winner I see. Congrats. Paghunda Zahid February 10, 2021 at 11:38 PM Thank you Andrea :)

Constance La France February 5, 2021 at 3:56 PM Paghunda, congratulations on your win in Brian's Your Choice contest with this excellent write, well done _Constance Paghunda Zahid February 8, 2021 at 9:03 AM Thanks a lot Constance!

Gershon Wolf December 29, 2020 at 6:24 PM A marvelous write, Paghyunda. Pure inspiration! Thanks, Gershon Paghunda Zahid January 7, 2021 at 10:02 PM Humbled

Akkina Downing December 27, 2020 at 1:24 PM WOW!! This is magnificent... I love it from start to finish. Paghunda Zahid January 7, 2021 at 10:01 PM Cheers!

Robert L. Hinshaw December 24, 2020 at 10:04 AM A splendid depiction of Creation, Paghunda in poetic form! Thanks so much for your kind comment re My 2021 New Years Resolution. I too have made many resolutions in the past and they turned out to be meaningless! A very Happy Holiday Season to you and your family - Bob Paghunda Zahid January 7, 2021 at 10:02 PM Happy new year Robert!

Robert Lindley December 24, 2020 at 8:34 AM This to me is truly a wonderful poem. One that reveals the poet's heart and soul. I mark this as a true poetic gem and a most inspirational piece.. A fav... A beauty, A treasure... God bless.. Paghunda Zahid January 7, 2021 at 10:01 PM Thank you Robert! Means a lot. Stay blessed

Quoth Theraven December 22, 2020 at 8:26 PM Paghunda, A corner of heaven saved in this poem's far reach. I can see your vision of shores morning and night and never grow tired. -Richard Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2020 at 8:59 AM Thanks Raven. Had no intentions of writing a poem. Just giving caption to a photo, and the lyrics Ocean Eyes started playing somewhere in the back of my mind. And I ended up writing this one. Thought it's more like a poem. So posted here.

Mystic Rose Rose December 22, 2020 at 11:14 AM your poem in itself is sublime dear poet. Thank you for sharing. Have a beautiful festive season. Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2020 at 9:00 AM Pleasure is all mine Mystic

Darlene De Beaulieu December 21, 2020 at 11:27 AM Hello Paghunda Zahid, so nice to meet you. this poem is lovely. I like the way you painted the scene with your words. I love the water whether the sea , ocean river, lakes. The sound of the water rushing to shore I find relaxing. I look forward to your comment. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 23, 2020 at 10:27 AM Hello Paghunda, a beach is a place many people go to cool off from the heat. If and when you have the chance to go to a beach- go. You would enjoy it. enjoy your day my friend. Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2020 at 9:04 AM I have never been to a beech. But I am in love with sea shores and beeches. The images I have in my mind are incredibly beautiful. & yes thanks to all those who take pics when they visit such breathtaking places :)