Ocean

Aqua-green or clearest blue, you are still a pure rare view. So much feeding on your birth, soon we'll see we'll lose your worth.

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Raj Nandy

Date: 7/27/2010 9:16:00 PM

A NICE THOUGHTFUL POEM JESSICA ! LOVED READING IT ! -Raj

Susan Mills

Date: 7/16/2010 4:22:00 AM

well said write here. jam packed meaning. Love, Susan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/14/2010 8:08:00 AM

Congrats on the 4th place win

Date: 7/13/2010 3:13:00 PM

Interesting perspective in this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in John's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations Jessica on your win in John Freeman's contest "Give Wisdom It's Beauty" (a couple of lines). Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2010 7:24:00 AM

Congrats Jessica on your winning poem in the Wisdom contest with this powerful message in couplet form... enjoy another big win.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 3:52:00 AM

Sadly, this is so true, Jessica. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/13/2010 3:26:00 AM

congratulations on your win with this very timely and thought provoking couplet on the ocean, Jessica! :) -- nikko :)

John Freeman

Date: 7/13/2010 12:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem's success, Jessica. The ocean is sure going thru some mistreatment by the hand of man in ignorance lately. Also the ocean life. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2010 12:35:00 AM

nice Jessica,enjoyed your couplet,..p.d.