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Ocean

"Under the amber sun's warmth seagulls squawk embraced in the freewheeling briny breeze and hum of the ocean's bosom." Quote by poet Sun ember warm light dances a brilliantly choreographed waltz rhythm upon the sapphire surface an erratic glitter to a world beneath a vessel of such mysteries that rises. Ocean churn by the wind and waves open in its abyss always in motion diving into the cool dispassionate within brackish water and its marine life. 3/25/2023 Writing Challenge - 'O' Words Poetry 2. Ocean Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/27/2023 1:24:00 PM
love this one AND the ocean. Congrats
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Date: 3/27/2023 10:46:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 3/27/2023 1:34:00 AM
A great poem, Eve, congratulations:)
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Date: 3/26/2023 2:53:00 PM
Hi Eve, You wrote such a well written about the ocean. Good content and imagery. Congratulations on your winning write. Enjoy the rest of your day:-)Alexis
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:30:00 PM
Nicely written Eve. I've always been fascinated by the ocean and its secrets. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/26/2023 12:56:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your wonderful poem, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/26/2023 5:56:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Eve. Much enjoyed your descriptions that bring forth the joy of ocean.
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Date: 3/26/2023 4:08:00 AM
Eve, you have done an excellent job capturing the essence of the ocean in your words. Wonderful metaphors shed an extra layer of beauty on your poem. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 3/26/2023 3:21:00 AM
- The sea has "many faces" ... the first thing I see every morning - A lovely poem, Eve :) - best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/25/2023 11:25:00 PM
When we think of the ocean, these are the thoughts that come to our mind. Beautiful Eve.
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