Get Your Premium Membership

Ocean Symphony

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Malabika Ray Choudhury.


frolicking with waves on a tranquil seashore… saffron-hued sapphire waves rolling away, I feel an Ocean of Love, an Ocean of longing, surrounding me ~ yearn a few moments with you. a buddhist temple on the sublime shore, melodic symphonic chimes soaring from above, serenade me to a dreamland where only two souls finally find each other. Imagine myself, a traveller from the ancient world of history walking through ages, crossing through seas and oceans, hills and dales of the universe, in search for love, kindness and inner peace. Written on September 22, 2021 "Strand (Dec. 28)" Poetry contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/23/2021 7:21:00 AM
I loved the way you weaved the words.. "an Ocean of Love"... " an Ocean of Longing... surrounding me.. "... also loved the sweet melody of the chimes from the Buddhist temple... such a beautiful write my dear friend... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2021 3:46:00 PM
Who will not fall in love with magnificent ocean splendor? Who will not love this poem? Lovely poem!
Login to Reply
Ray Choudhury Avatar
Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/22/2021 3:49:00 PM
Thank you, JCB, sweetest friend! I am glad you liked it.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things