Obsolete

Antiquated, so outdated, old relic, dinasour. These things that I hate to admit, I can relate to, oh such a bore. Old fossile, neanderthal, over the hill, wow this is overkill. I'm out of style, way too many miles, sure do need a change. Wonder where I can trade this old model in. Guess I'm out of luck, much to my chagrin! I feel like Yoda, out of mode-a-joke to the younger folk. News flash for you, I'm still cool, still got my hair, can still match your glare. Cheap sunglasses, six string too, I'm still rockin, not hip-hoppin. Watcha think about that~~~Get Back Jack~~~~

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Don Johnson

Date: 7/31/2011 7:38:00 PM

Holey suffering moley Jack, almost had a heart attack,( na its wind :) Get out them blue suede shoes, strap em on and canter too, strut your stuff young Jack. good one mate, Don

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/31/2011 8:11:00 PM

Thank you mate, so much appreciated...love ya blue....old Jack

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/26/2011 2:36:00 PM

Loved It! I still have a smile on my face as I type.Keep on rockin Jack.Your only as old as you feel.I'm sure your still young at heart.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/26/2011 9:05:00 PM

Thanks Gentleman Dan, your comment is greatly appreciate mate.....Old Jack

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/26/2011 2:33:00 PM

oh, swinging to the hilt, jack... love your groove, wow! :) huggs, nette

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/26/2011 9:06:00 PM

Thank you so very much for your kind and gracious comments Lovely Lady....with love....Old Jack

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 7/26/2011 11:50:00 AM

Good write and hilarious. Really enjoyed the perspective. Thanks for sharing, and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/26/2011 1:06:00 PM

Thank you for your gracious and kind comments, appreciated much.....lovely lady....Old Jack

Steven Cooke

Date: 7/26/2011 8:34:00 AM

Good Poetry. We were built to last, ask the wife Steve From sheffield

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/26/2011 1:08:00 PM

Thanks for you gracious and kind comments nice Gentleman Steven Cooke, much appreciated.....Old Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2011 7:46:00 AM

It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Jack Jr. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/26/2011 1:09:00 PM

Tnank you lovely lady Carol for your gracious and kind comments....Love Old Jack

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/25/2011 9:11:00 PM

High sense of humor, Jack

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/26/2011 12:48:00 AM

Thank you very much for your gracious and kind comments Dr. Ram, appreciate it so much......God bless....Old Jack

Don Johnson

Date: 7/25/2011 7:16:00 PM

On ya Jack , you aint slack, give life anudder crack:) or a honorable mention, cos ya aint in detention. Let Yoda out use the force:)... death don't want me baby doll, healthy as a hogn moll, guess i get into playin the part, and friends have died the hurtin part... loves ya blue, Don

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/25/2011 7:26:00 PM

LOL, Your comments are so awsome my Aussie Gent Mate......Love you Old Mate.........Zorro keep that sword flickin them Z"s, LOL

Constance La France

Date: 7/25/2011 2:53:00 PM

Jack, I really enjoyed your poem, you forget to say you had a great sense of humour and thanks so much for your kind comments on my poetry~~

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/25/2011 4:07:00 PM

Thanks very much for your kind comments Lovely Lady, much appreciated.....you are a gifted writer...with Love....Old Jack

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/25/2011 2:52:00 PM

Way to go, Jack. I've got my six-string too. I play better now than I did back in my teens! My hair's going thin though...LOL! A good write. Regards, Robert.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/25/2011 4:09:00 PM

Thanks very much mate, so much appreciated....glad you've still got your six, get that red vette back too....LOL! thanks again Old Jack

Andrew Crisci

Date: 7/25/2011 2:02:00 PM

Hi, Jack. Thanks for your kind comment. Sometimes I feel like an old dinasour...but I don't feel old as they think I am. I have plenty of energy and keep on going like a Duracel battery! It's not how you look but how you feel inside. Some guys look older than they actually are, and I can fool people with my looks! I love your humorous poem. I wish you all the best! Kind Regards, Andrew.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 7/25/2011 2:17:00 PM

Thanks for your gracious and kind comments. Lovely Lady...very much appreciated......My best wishes....Old Jack