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Obsidian Clouds

A dark sky, still, Something is astir. A distant flash of lightning, Disruption in the air. No birds are flying All sheltering in the trees, The atmosphere oppressive A feeling of unease. Waiting for the maelstrom Clouds obsidian black, Again the lightning illuminates The storms oncoming track. Soon to be upon us Our excitement tinged with fear Trees now start to bend, The thunderstorm is here !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/11/2018 10:26:00 AM
Hi Gary: Wonderful imagery of the storm and the oxymoron in title is brilliant. Your cadence really holds the anticipation of the storm. Cheers, SuZ
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/11/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne :)
Date: 2/16/2018 7:06:00 AM
such fabulous descriptive imagery Gary I felt a sense of foreboding with the storm approaching and i love the title:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/16/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 2/15/2018 9:10:00 PM
Nicely penned, Gary! Your rhythm is impeccable! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 2/15/2018 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Laura :)
Date: 2/15/2018 9:31:00 AM
LOVE IT! My best to you in the contest! xomo
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/15/2018 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Maureen :)

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