Observing Nature's Beauty

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Serene Stream Flowing Through Overhanging Trees A Shaded Journey ...

long tree limbs stretching over gurgling brook flowing minnows are dashing I sit on the bank observing nature’s beauty a calming moment

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Jay Narain

Date: 7/22/2025 10:35:00 AM

nice serenity poem.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2025 10:56:00 AM

Thanks, Jay, I could use a day at this scene. Bill

Sara Baker

Date: 7/21/2025 4:40:00 PM

your words are as soothing as watching a babbling brook. Your words remind me of that brook in Allen where we walked...

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2025 10:57:00 AM

It does look a lot like that stream, doesn't it. Thanks for the memories, Sara. Have a pleasant day! Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2025 3:05:00 PM

Hello Bill, uyes being by the water is calming. Whether fishing ot just watching the waves is calming. Your Friend, /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2025 3:49:00 PM

Hello bill, How are you? How are you? Yor welcome my friend. /Darlene/.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2025 10:58:00 AM

Thank you for the kind comments, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 7/21/2025 12:52:00 PM

Yes! Observing nature’s beauty is calm cool fun and bless! Nice read! Have a nice time my poetry friend! Best wishes ~ AA

Bill Baker
Date: 7/21/2025 1:10:00 PM

Thanks for the comments, AA. Have a nice day, my friend.