Obscurity

Love can feel like an uphill race, yet, win or lose, you can't abstain. And only time can ease the hurt of a heart hollowed out by pain. Fledgling wings clipped by betrayal can't take off in pursuit of truth. And every cut gets less discreet; as hope hardens the hearts of youth. When reality gets revealed, trust defends the lies love clung to. And as happiness disappears, life seems surreal and untrue. Tears hide behind a mask of smiles, not to show the pain you're feeling. And yet, your heart's devastated; for broken hearts require healing. Tempted by sexual urges; innocence lost its purity. And so, in this uncaring world, dreams oft die in obscurity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/1/2018 5:59:00 PM
Strong and rich imagery, Emile. "only time can ease the hurt of a heart hollowed out by pain." How true that life seems so dark without love and "anger hardens hearts of youth."
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, your visits are always most welcome. Emile.
Date: 5/11/2015 10:28:00 PM
Love your comment that you left for me, Thanks alot, it was a great pick me up, your poem is very heart felt and profound it is full of deeply emotional meaning, glad I stopped by to read it, cheri
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Cherl, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 5/11/2015 8:37:00 PM
G'day Emile... it is a pleasure to read a such well written and rhymed poem Emile - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, your warm friendly words are much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 5/11/2015 10:00:00 AM
Angst-ridden write but beautiful as always. 7
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Nandita, your visits always pick me up. Emile.
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