Obscurity

stars hide - muffled,
in a blizzard of flurries -
the screams of owls echo
through a once silent wood.

wet snow settles - frozen tears
on the skeletal arms
where oaks and maples shiver
and birches bow - forsaken?

will they break before morning...

was hope held too tightly
and hugged beyond welcome?

perhaps there, under the
   stratus coverlet, or
horizons born in a different wish
 
tomorrow's shattered tears
will melt warm...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 9:36 AM
Beautiful. For me, it kind of goes along with your contest theme.
Cornish Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Thank you AD - actually nothing to do with any contest, mine or otherwise---I'm thinking about one for my newest contest and will be nothing like this one---thanks again though!
Rodgers Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Hello Craig, such a haunting exploration of nature's beauty intertwined with feelings of despair and uncertainty. I loved how it was so evocative, capturing the essence of a winter landscape filled with emotion. Everything a great poem needs. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Manassian Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 12:44 AM
That's why you are a master wordsmith! This is so good. Those two lines about hope show an exceptional choice of words. Good to read you again.
Cornish Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 12:34 PM
Dear Eileen - wish I could hug you in your corner of this crazy world -- and prey you're safe -- thanks so much, from someone I respect and admire!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 1:51 PM
Emotive poetry, Craig! Perhaps those shattered tears will melt warm…
Cornish Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Thanks so much Kim
Ashley Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Dear Craig, your atmospheric and sensory imagery captures the sorrow and loss of winter when existence in obscurity is harsh and vibrance is stilled. Yet, I feel a hint of hope in this hopeless scene with your last two lines suggesting a change from cold to warmth, renewal, on the horizon. Beautiful and thought-provoking! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Cornish Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Susan, thanks so much - I often read my write afterward and think, not that it's special, but what lead me to those thoughts? And then, I think, they aren't truly mine?
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