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Jan. 5, 2024 16.22pm

At that time the disciples came to Jesus, saying, “Who is the greatest in the kingdom of heaven?” And calling to him a child, he put him in the midst of them and said, “Truly, I say to you, unless you turn and become like children, you will never enter the kingdom of heaven.” (Matthew 18:1-3)

A child, so badly hurt and cried, Now laughing loudly while lying at my side; Giving me lots of kisses and sweet embrace, In her mind, painful words were all erased. Heart of innocence generates oblivious mind, To easily forgive and forget, no more rewind; Angelic love in a heart deletes mind's negativity, Child’s oblivion is a paradigm for us to divinity.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2024 6:29:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - A lovely poem, Leonora :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 2/7/2024 11:06:00 PM

Belated thank you on reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/14/2024 9:08:00 PM

"Heart of innocence generates oblivious mind, To easily forgive and forget, no more rewind" - Great learning, indeed. Congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/7/2024 11:07:00 PM

Belated thank you for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Christuraj. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 1/14/2024 8:16:00 PM

Oasis, Oblivion, Odyssey Words Contest Judged: 1/14/2024 3:28:00 AM Sponsored by: Constance La France Place 2 (up to 3 multi-w and 3 HM

Constance La France

Date: 1/14/2024 4:48:00 PM

Len, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Constance. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you and your writings. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2024 10:53:00 AM

You have such a sweet spirit which emanates from this poem, Len

Len Gasun
Date: 1/9/2024 11:31:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comment my dear poet friend Andrea. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 1/5/2024 3:04:00 AM

What a deep and profound write this is dear len, children are so innocent they forgive and forget fast, and when as adults we do the same, sometimes we are referred to as being naive and blind. Iv been called that because i forgive fast and forget.. oblivion, or being oblivious sometimes can be good and bad. And your way of expressing and interpreting the prompt is so deeply moving and unique! Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light. Best wishes for the contest

Len Gasun
Date: 1/7/2024 7:46:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting / encouraging comments and warm greetings in God's light. Also, thank you for your best wishes. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 1/5/2024 1:55:00 AM

Bible verse to paste soon coz got a problem on pasting: At that time the disciples came to Jesus, saying, “Who is the greatest in the kingdom of heaven?” And calling to him a child, he put him in the midst of them and said, “Truly, I say to you, unless you turn and become like children, you will never enter the kingdom of heaven.” (Matthew 18:1-3).