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Oblivion

“Oblivion: the fact or condition of not remembering : a state marked by lack of awareness or consciousness” ~ Dictionary meaning How aware are we, considering that we know not who we are Strange it is that most of care not enough to investigate Content donning the label of a fictitious avatar Ignorant of our true origin, in stupor we stagnate Yet in moments of quietude we do hear our soul’s call But heeding not love’s whispers, we let ego cravings dictate It seems we’re doomed to oblivion, unless the truth we recall We notice that fears and desires are fed by lower mind So from thought spirals we make our withdrawal Befriending silence, with the vast void entwined Surrendering ego, relinquishing each conditioned belief We regain soul’s blissful lustre, that God Himself has designed Thus indulgence in desire, fuelled by our thoughts, is joy’s thief To exit delusion, we must allow that that never was to die Awareness self-aware resurfaces, granting soul relief God dwells in the cave of our heart, allow His love to vivify As the false self falls away, we become the vastness of the sky 24-March-2023 ____________ Writing Challenge - 'O' Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Rhymezone, PS Grammar

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Date: 3/27/2023 10:35:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, U.S. :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/27/2023 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine :)
Date: 3/26/2023 9:19:00 PM
"God dwells in the cave of our heart, allow His love to vivify/ As the false self falls away, we become the vastness of the sky"..... such profound thoughts all through the poem. I always feel that you are a philosopher of the classic kind...... Congratulations Seeker friend on your first place win.
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Date: 3/27/2023 1:07:00 AM
As long as you enjoyed … :)
Date: 3/26/2023 1:20:00 PM
Sounds so smoothly inviting. :) Congratulations on your win!:)
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Date: 3/26/2023 6:59:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/26/2023 12:42:00 PM
Seeker, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your wonderful poem, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/26/2023 6:58:00 PM
Thank you, Constance :)
Date: 3/24/2023 12:31:00 AM
Extremely interesting - well written
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Date: 3/24/2023 1:38:00 AM
Thank you, DD

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