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Obito's Immortal( Naruto Lovers)

Obito’s immortal You wished you had more time with everyone But life has taken that away You protected your friend, defended him Stood below a falling rock Your right side got crushed, you hardly feel it Never gave your friend a gift for becoming a jounin But on the minutes of death, you thought of something Something that is not a useless luggage You gave him your Sharingan! A gift that you had not life to use twice A gift that showed your loyalty After you have hated your friend, after all the words he said You became friends, he rescued you from all the bad guys And you offered and gave in return your life, your Sharingan! I can never believe the love I can never imagine the friendship I will always hate the fate You have died; your friend has lived… What rule does this follow? The rule of God, the will of his that will stay…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/9/2010 6:52:00 AM
wow powerful words,, this is like it's speaking like strongly,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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