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Obese Mackian

There once was a man from Mac,
who was loving, but oh so fat.
When he ate so much,
he fell off his crutch,
he found that his food didn't love back!



NOTE: This was actually the first limerick I ever wrote. Not a favorite, but I still enjoy it... I like how with the limerick I have a great excuse to come up with complete non-sense. Like a fictional town named Mac who's inhabitants are called "Mackians".

Copyright © Timothy Hicks | Year Posted 2013

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Laura Breidenthal Date: 3/29/2016 6:45:00 PM Love it, Tim! This is a great first limerick! You have a clever sense of humor^_^ Always, Laura Login to Reply Timothy Hicks Date: 4/1/2016 1:58:00 AM Thanks Laura! Not my favorite limerick I've written, but it opened the door to future escapades into Crazy Town :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/13/2014 5:37:00 PM Welcome back Timothy. Login to Reply

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 5/26/2014 12:09:00 PM Hi Timothy thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem in the past. It is well appreciated and treasured. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/25/2014 8:17:00 AM Back again and hoping you are okay. It has been almost a year since you last posted and you have been missed. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/5/2014 8:24:00 PM I keep returning in hopes that you have returned. Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 12/24/2013 5:54:00 AM Very funny, Timothy... Merry Xmas... Terry Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 11/21/2013 7:54:00 AM Splendid and adequate for a sound mind. This gave me more light to my soul and has stimulated a self- expression from me, serving as the fuel to my outburst. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/25/2013 1:56:00 AM Checking back again Timothy. Goodnight Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 10/18/2013 7:33:00 AM My pen flows bitter ink and needs your creative presence...... Where are you? Without you the soup is tasteless..... Missing you.... Jake Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/6/2013 1:43:00 AM timothy, I am waiting for you to return to Soup. Please say you will come back. I miss you@@ Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/16/2013 8:19:00 AM I'm concerned for you Timothy, it has been a long time and you went from being super active to just dissapearing. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/13/2013 4:16:00 AM I am hoping you return my friend, you are missed! Login to Reply

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 7/29/2013 5:28:00 AM A super cool limerick i enjoyd. It has a ring of truth somehow. Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 7/26/2013 4:05:00 PM Do you know chicken mcnuggets have no chicken in them ;} Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/24/2013 1:40:00 PM IT IS A COOL LIM.... SKAT Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 7/11/2013 8:17:00 PM Oh great fun..... Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 7/11/2013 10:29:00 AM Left to me, this your first attempt rocks. Limerick is all about being witty... in your approach to0 the subject matter. Well done Hicks. AO Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/9/2013 7:37:00 AM You are missedmy friend. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/8/2013 7:13:00 AM hey, timothy, my friend, hurry back, from wherever you went to!!! Login to Reply

Karen Anglesey Date: 7/7/2013 10:24:00 AM Timothy, great humor and wit. Hysterical imagery in this delightful Limerick...I enjoyed it immensly :) Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/2/2013 8:09:00 AM Thinking of you, hope all is well my friend. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/1/2013 8:55:00 PM hey, this is pretty good!!! where have you been, my friend? Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/26/2013 7:50:00 AM Good morning Tim, it seems a bit to quiet around here without you. Hope all is well Login to Reply

Caleah Buil Date: 6/25/2013 5:11:00 PM LOL! I liked this!! For some reason I thought of MacDonalds. lol! Great limerick! :D Login to Reply

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 6/23/2013 8:00:00 PM Limericks are supposed to be silly, witty and funny and you delivered! Great job. Read my 'Birds -n- Bees" limerick, was 2nd one I wrote and sadly never judged. Hugs Login to Reply

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