Obese Mackian

There once was a man from Mac,
who was loving, but oh so fat.
When he ate so much,
he fell off his crutch,
he found that his food didn't love back!



NOTE: This was actually the first limerick I ever wrote. Not a favorite, but I still enjoy it... I like how with the limerick I have a great excuse to come up with complete non-sense. Like a fictional town named Mac who's inhabitants are called "Mackians".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2016 6:45:00 PM
Love it, Tim! This is a great first limerick! You have a clever sense of humor^_^ Always, Laura
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Date: 4/1/2016 1:58:00 AM
Thanks Laura! Not my favorite limerick I've written, but it opened the door to future escapades into Crazy Town :)
Date: 10/13/2014 5:37:00 PM
Welcome back Timothy.
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Date: 5/26/2014 12:09:00 PM
Hi Timothy thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem in the past. It is well appreciated and treasured.
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:17:00 AM
Back again and hoping you are okay. It has been almost a year since you last posted and you have been missed.
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Date: 4/5/2014 8:24:00 PM
I keep returning in hopes that you have returned.
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Date: 12/24/2013 5:54:00 AM
Very funny, Timothy... Merry Xmas... Terry
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Date: 11/21/2013 7:54:00 AM
Splendid and adequate for a sound mind. This gave me more light to my soul and has stimulated a self- expression from me, serving as the fuel to my outburst.
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Date: 10/25/2013 1:56:00 AM
Checking back again Timothy. Goodnight
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Date: 10/18/2013 7:33:00 AM
My pen flows bitter ink and needs your creative presence...... Where are you? Without you the soup is tasteless..... Missing you.... Jake
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Date: 10/6/2013 1:43:00 AM
timothy, I am waiting for you to return to Soup. Please say you will come back. I miss you@@
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Date: 9/16/2013 8:19:00 AM
I'm concerned for you Timothy, it has been a long time and you went from being super active to just dissapearing.
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Date: 9/13/2013 4:16:00 AM
I am hoping you return my friend, you are missed!
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Date: 7/29/2013 5:28:00 AM
A super cool limerick i enjoyd. It has a ring of truth somehow.
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Date: 7/26/2013 4:05:00 PM
Do you know chicken mcnuggets have no chicken in them ;}
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:40:00 PM
IT IS A COOL LIM.... SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2013 8:17:00 PM
Oh great fun.....
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Date: 7/11/2013 10:29:00 AM
Left to me, this your first attempt rocks. Limerick is all about being witty... in your approach to0 the subject matter. Well done Hicks. AO
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Date: 7/9/2013 7:37:00 AM
You are missedmy friend.
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:13:00 AM
hey, timothy, my friend, hurry back, from wherever you went to!!!
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Date: 7/7/2013 10:24:00 AM
Timothy, great humor and wit. Hysterical imagery in this delightful Limerick...I enjoyed it immensly :)
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Date: 7/2/2013 8:09:00 AM
Thinking of you, hope all is well my friend.
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:55:00 PM
hey, this is pretty good!!! where have you been, my friend?
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Date: 6/26/2013 7:50:00 AM
Good morning Tim, it seems a bit to quiet around here without you. Hope all is well
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Date: 6/25/2013 5:11:00 PM
LOL! I liked this!! For some reason I thought of MacDonalds. lol! Great limerick! :D
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Date: 6/23/2013 8:00:00 PM
Limericks are supposed to be silly, witty and funny and you delivered! Great job. Read my 'Birds -n- Bees" limerick, was 2nd one I wrote and sadly never judged. Hugs
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