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Obeisance

Change is marvel When you tend to Pay obeisance.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/25/2024 10:41:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I agree change is a marvel. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2024 10:43:00 AM

Hello Hugo, Your welcome . Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/25/2024 10:51:00 AM

Hi, Darlene. Thanks my friend for the comment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2024 10:34:00 AM

Your Than-Bauk’s have no rhyme? Is that the way some are written? Just wondering…

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 6:00:00 AM

Thank you for your response!

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 8/25/2024 10:50:00 AM

You're right, Kim. Than-Bauk is a Burmese poetry. It's rhyme in contention with their own language. The order of this poetry is 3 lines with 4 syllables each. My Than-Bauk is free verse in English form but the order of 4 syllables on each line is there which is the standard. You can make also in rhyme form as long as the 3 lines and 4 syllables each is followed.