Obedience

laws of righteousness ~ spiritual betterment through obedience

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/27/2023 7:40:00 PM

Gosh, while I'm with you about 'obedience,' it sure has been made to sound like a 'dirty word' these days. Can't believe my own reaction to it at first glance!! The wokeness is getting to me, I see.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/28/2023 3:49:00 PM

I think because many people have forgotten, or never learned, the laws of righteousness. Don't let the 'woken' win gw! laf

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/24/2023 3:56:00 PM

Spot on Linda. well formed and perfectly true. A wonderful Senryu! Best wishes my friend.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/3/2023 4:24:00 PM

Don't know how I missed responding to this Svvie! Goodness - I hate letting a chance go by! Thanks for your support! :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/24/2023 9:55:00 AM

One thing to remember, Children who disobey get punished:) Nice one, Alice!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/24/2023 4:35:00 PM

You are correct Daniel. I don't think we'll have any do-overs, so better to obey the laws of righteousness sooner rather than later. :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/24/2023 10:08:00 AM

I have a feeling on judgement day, there will not be a lot of "talking toos" just a thought:) perhaps a yay or nay. It's gonna be long line!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/24/2023 10:05:00 AM

Worked with children a good part of my life, and never had to punish a one. Respect and thoughtful conversation.