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Oasis of Ecstasy In Word Morph

Rise of scorched sands up in the desert air at noon obscures the blazing ride of the burnt sun on the sky. When the dust storm is rife gliding across rolling dune frail slope ripe for sliding holds on, doesn’t know why. Wind-swept cactus thorns rile nesting wren to scream till storm stops, stars file out in firmament to enthrall. As the lone Bedouin I fill my mind with the moonbeam, reach the oasis of ecstasy where I see silver dust fall. March 1, 2019

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Date: 3/24/2019 7:44:00 AM
Bravo, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/27/2019 1:29:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 3/24/2019 7:39:00 AM
This poem had such great imagery. A very wonderful entry to my competition. Congratulations on your top finish.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/27/2019 1:29:00 AM
Thank you, Jesse for the placement.
Date: 2/28/2019 11:53:00 PM
written amazingly-I fill my mind with the moonbeam// nice poetic expression
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/27/2019 1:28:00 AM
Thank you.

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