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Oak Tree

It was a stifling temp of 100 degrees there was not a single breeze. Yet the old,old,oak tree spoke to me as I sit at Bradley's grave site in the cemetery. I would speak out loud to Bradley through my tears the air remained still until he heard all my fears then that ole oak tree would bow down and whisper It's all right mama, I am in the breeze that kisses you. With each breath you take I take double to let you know I am happy and free from trouble. My sign to you is forever in the Red Rose that you always bring me from home. My breath that is this wind dries your eyes and I bow down so you know, yes it's me you do see. I love you Bradley and thank you for the sign of a breeze on an arid day sent just for me. Debbie Wagoner 6/14/10

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Date: 6/18/2010 9:20:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:04:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. I like the rhyming pattern and how it moves the poem along. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/17/2010 8:55:00 PM
lovely write, enjoyed
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