Oak

oak leaves straggle dangling in early gust of snow AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on April 28, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/30/2019 4:18:00 PM

I can see it, for this poem is like a painting.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/30/2019 4:23:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/29/2019 7:09:00 PM

Reminds of a tree I have Ive named Lazarus. Every spring I think its dead but always late spring it sprouts leaves

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2019 8:43:00 PM

Tough like us. LOL

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/28/2019 12:15:00 PM

I always feel kind of sorry when I see a tree almost bare with the wind moving its branches as it looks like it is shivering in the cold. Your poem gave me that feeling Line. There is fantastic imagery in the short piece! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2019 6:35:00 PM

Thanks for the most appreciated compliment, Connie.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/28/2019 10:29:00 AM

Great one Line . It reminds me of last Fall. Snow fell before leaves finished falling. Well done :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2019 6:36:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.