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Oak leaves

oak leaves straggle
dangling in
early gust of snow



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

April 30, 2019 at 4:18 PM

I can see it, for this poem is like a painting.

Line Gauthier

April 30, 2019 at 4:23 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

Timothy Mcguire

April 29, 2019 at 7:09 PM

Reminds of a tree I have Ive named Lazarus. Every spring I think its dead but always late spring it sprouts leaves

Line Gauthier

April 29, 2019 at 8:43 PM

Tough like us. LOL

Connie Marcum Wong

April 28, 2019 at 12:15 PM

I always feel kind of sorry when I see a tree almost bare with the wind moving its branches as it looks like it is shivering in the cold. Your poem gave me that feeling Line. There is fantastic imagery in the short piece! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier

April 28, 2019 at 6:35 PM

Thanks for the most appreciated compliment, Connie.