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O Timeless Beings

O timeless beings Who’ve traveled so far away To try and help, in a way They are merciless Exist in some other plane They don’t understand our world They’re certainly flawed Conjecture they don’t belong The end is near, what to do What was majestic Now crumbles beneath our feet They fear our stomp, mighty step Now time nearly ends Their existence with us ends We now move around without
Russell Sivey Form: Katauta

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/15/2012 8:32:00 PM
Nice job here Russ. I get the feeling of all being lost though. A defeated feeling. sad. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:38:00 PM
Thought provoking piece indeed, my friend
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Date: 2/15/2012 11:14:00 AM
thank you for seeing the end comming.
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Date: 2/15/2012 10:00:00 AM
a fleeting song yet eternal in its poetic grace, russel.. goood job!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/15/2012 4:06:00 AM
Think happy thoughts Russell!!!- Wery well written my friend! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/15/2012 12:42:00 AM
nothing lasts forever cept maybe our souls, well done mate, thoughts play a cute role...
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