O the Grieving

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My thoughts let go of a thousand memories,
     Like faces, dates, times and places;
Yet, I can easily recall each and every detail,
               On the day of your funeral.

                                    O the grieving . . . 

In the middle of a snow storm I followed,
     And the wind blew back my long hair;
As we meandered down a winding cold path,
                The wild storm paused in the trees.

                                    O the weeping . . . 

Snowflakes fell on me from the tangled branches,
     Falling like crying tears cascading down;
I am lost and moaning in this forever, ever memory,
                  And now the snow drifts in the cemetery.

                                      O the sadness . . . 

A headstone is buried deep in the pure white,
     And but one engraved word is revealed;
In this pristine cold, dead winter wonderland,
                     Only one word can be seen, mother.

                                        O the lamenting . . . 



              Hidden beneath the snow . . .

                   I will treasure your arms last embrace mother
                               Till this heart stops beating . . . .




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September 24, 2014


Poetry/Verse/O The Grieving
Copyright Protected, ID 09-602-798-24
All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France

Entered into the contest, A poem not entered in a contest, 
sponsor, Poet Destroyer Judged 2014

Fourth Place
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Guzzi Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Constance it sure is a #1 a fav & a 7. Sending you hugs! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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February 1, 2015 at 4:13 PM
A LOVELY WIN...SKAT
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Dropping back with my congrats :-) Hugs Jan xx
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February 1, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Broken, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :) Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Own your Beauty" if you'd like or have time. Have yourself a wonderful day. Love LINDA
Lindley Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 9:31 AM
I am in awe of this write! Giving it a super 7 but wish I could rate it a 10.. Adding to my fav list and thanks....
La France Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 5:18 PM
O thanks Robert, you are so sweet ~~
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:28 PM
truly touching deeply beautiful piece
La France Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Thanks so much Liam ~~
Yvonne Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 9:58 AM
A touching poem. A beautiful write.
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October 21, 2014 at 5:20 PM
Thanks Maurice ~~
Horne Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 10:51 AM
what a beautiful and tender write, my friend. Awesome. Hope you and the kitties are well today x
La France Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 5:20 PM
Thanks so much Jack, me and the kitties are just fine ~~
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 8:54 PM
Very beautiful poem. The fact that death can not steal the love we have for our mothers is a great thing.
La France Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Thank you Brenda for your forever support of my poetry ~~
Roper Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Awe how wonderful eve
La France Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Thanks Eve ~~
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 4:13 PM
incredible imagery in this truly beautifully penned sad write. good luck in the contest :-) Hugs jan xxx
La France Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Thanks so much Jan for your kind words ~~
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