O Luna-O Soleil

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What is different though seems not much change. I explored the eclipse sitting in my living space, shades partially open. My hubby continued to work. This means he will finish and we can go out to dinner. I did not get any glasses to view the eclipse as I was too busy preparing for my trip. I saw a previous one so no biggie! Hugs-a-million ~ Kim

I didn’t notice much change, but now the birds begin to sing…the music breaks through…it is okay once more. The ancients must have thought so. I wonder of the animals in the zoo, the scientists rubbing their palms. I noticed when it seemed a minor dim, hardly noticeable. Didn’t have glasses to join the din, so opened the shades. Now, seems a bit brighter. Hoping the world sees it the same. A bit brighter, a hopeful tomorrow. O Luna! O Soleil! Slay me…but save my eyes. The night and day meet, out in the open they meet, and the worshippers gather, but I hold out for the Creator, my hands as if holding an infant, arise. It is sunrise, yet not. It was sunset, but not. Sooner comes the Lord, ready or not…

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