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O, Luminous Star

Please shed some light O, luminous star on this puzzle for me You light the way for earthlings Can't you help fellow starlings born without wings

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/14/2023 2:09:00 AM

I love how beautiful this poetic plea is. Stars sprinkle silvery light upon us all, when darkness consumes us. Something about luminous star seems so uplifting n inspiring. So exquisite and soulful

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/14/2023 6:24:00 PM

Appreciate all your eloquent comments about this ditty, Empress. You had me reading it again to check if any of your kind words were actually on the money... Hard for me to judge... I'll let your viewpoint stand! Thanks!

Valsa George

Date: 9/14/2023 1:31:00 AM

There should be a guiding light ! Only with its luminous light, our paths will be lighted. This earnest plea will not go unheard. Beautiful Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/14/2023 6:22:00 PM

Thank you for your enthusiasm over this one, Valsa. Much appreciated. Light and Joy, Gershon