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O, Luminous Star

Please shed some light
    O, luminous star
      on this puzzle for me

  You light the way for earthlings
    Can't you help fellow starlings
      born without wings

Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2023

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Ink Empress Date: 9/14/2023 2:09:00 AM I love how beautiful this poetic plea is. Stars sprinkle silvery light upon us all, when darkness consumes us. Something about luminous star seems so uplifting n inspiring. So exquisite and soulful Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 9/14/2023 6:24:00 PM Appreciate all your eloquent comments about this ditty, Empress. You had me reading it again to check if any of your kind words were actually on the money... Hard for me to judge... I'll let your viewpoint stand! Thanks!

Valsa George Date: 9/14/2023 1:31:00 AM There should be a guiding light ! Only with its luminous light, our paths will be lighted. This earnest plea will not go unheard. Beautiful Gershon! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 9/14/2023 6:22:00 PM Thank you for your enthusiasm over this one, Valsa. Much appreciated. Light and Joy, Gershon

Jerry Brotherton Date: 9/13/2023 6:36:00 PM Too funny, my friend. 'Starlings born without wings'. Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 9/13/2023 8:17:00 PM Nice that you found the humor in this one. Purely intentional. Thanks, Jerry.

Joe Dimino Date: 9/13/2023 2:36:00 PM I agree...often not wanting to admit my earth lineage. "fellow starlings born without wings" -- love it! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 9/13/2023 8:29:00 PM Hey, thanks for the love on this one, Joe. Appreciated, gw

The Situation Date: 9/13/2023 2:33:00 PM makes me wonder if ET see's our sun. And how do they know which planet to go to Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 9/13/2023 8:17:00 AM Very nice Gershon :) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 9/13/2023 8:24:00 PM Thank you, Heidi. Hope you are doing alright. In fact, hope you are doing fabulous! ~ gw

Charles Messina Date: 9/13/2023 5:19:00 AM Nice thoughts :) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 9/13/2023 8:27:00 PM Charlie, I love that hat and those shades on your avatar photo. YOU DA MAN!

Shirley Hawkins Date: 9/12/2023 9:13:00 PM Or wings that are broken. It's a very caring verse. Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 9/13/2023 8:42:00 PM Thank you, Shirley. I hadn't seen this poem as particularly 'caring' before you opened my eyes. Thank you!