Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Free verse

O Big Brother Where Art Thou

Osiris watching from the sky

Satellite recon harvesting personal

data on you and I

Sending chills down the spine

In the name of national security

Big brother is listening on the line

Privacy eroded freedoms rights scorned

Electronic surveillance now the norm	

Everywhere you go Big brother knows

Everything you do Big Brother is watching you

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Reggae Magnet January 8, 2013 at 10:42 PM Big brother watches from the sky, actions replayed we dare not lie, love it.

Anne Rutherford July 14, 2012 at 6:16 AM Congrats on your win Lori ,So true, we are watched everywhere now.You hit the nail on the head with this poem.Anne

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2012 at 5:08 PM It sure does seem that way. you captured it well! Congrats on your win.

David Williams July 11, 2012 at 2:01 AM Lori, congrats on your win, I love this one, and there is no getting away from it...David

Gwendolen Song July 10, 2012 at 3:49 PM I am now so used to big brother watching me that I am almost immune to him...nice emotions expressed in this winning write, Lori...congrats...gwendolen :)

Carol Sunshine Brown July 10, 2012 at 12:31 PM Congratulations on your win in Susan's " Big Brother " contest Lori. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson July 9, 2012 at 7:49 PM Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Joseph May July 9, 2012 at 3:08 PM nice write Lori...congrats on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 9, 2012 at 12:58 PM congrats Lori on a super write and win for big brother theme luv..

Joann Grisetti July 9, 2012 at 11:24 AM Scary, but true. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Merryman July 9, 2012 at 8:42 AM Congrats on your win, Lori! Love, Kim

David Scott July 6, 2012 at 12:52 PM I agree with what your saying it feels like that now a bit unfair When I was youger about twenty two I liked to be noticed but now prefer to be in the back groung

Robert Pettit July 2, 2012 at 4:33 PM Is the late George Orwell's prophecy coming true? I would hate to think so even though it sure seems like it's becoming reality. You have given us something good to ponder.

Joann Grisetti June 28, 2012 at 3:18 PM This is a scary thought. It has been building for a long time, more and more surveillance, yet I feel less secure.

Steven Henderson June 23, 2012 at 6:54 PM My fear of the Almighty is greater than the fear of mortal men! Peace and blessings. Lori Lucas Mcclure June 23, 2012 at 6:59 PM Mine too!!!!!!!!! He has not given us the spirit of fear but of sound mind. Thank you for your comment !