Ny Reel Deal

Ilene was on her morning walk
When she saw a grandfather clock
But something was wrong!
The clock had no dong!
It was a replica Tik Tok!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 2:19 AM
"a replica tik tok!" - I am pretty sure this has something to do with the real tik tok. Clever.
Babcock Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 3:16 PM
Like this naughty one. love phyl
M  Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 4:35 AM
Like this one Rico….Aloha…,Debx
George Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 7:46 PM
It seems your naughty mind always goes after 'ding and dong'... Rico ! :) :)
Rose  Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 5:06 PM
Dong it high dong it low but dam it, dong it or it won't go !!!
Bauer Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 2:56 PM
Hey Rico! Tom told me to check this out and I was delightfully surprised! Thanks for the shout-out! I think it’s so cool that we can connect across the miles and despite our very different environments…
Debole Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Hi Rico, Very clever! - Gail
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Lol, she'll love this Rico Tom
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