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Nuts in the Soup

I wrote these lines 7 years ago, slightly edited today. Perhaps they have more meaning now than they did then. "There are so many nuts in the soup!" That's what I hear and see and it's not absurd. Some poets add a pinch of spice now and then, from their wit and the sharpened nib of a pen. Nutty little writers who bring us smiles and fill the soup pot with toilet humor about 'poop.' Make no mistake, they have other poetic skills. The almonds release the sorrow in their heart. Somewhere in the past, it's been torn apart. They write of delicate words and expressions, that bleed from pens with sorrowful confessions. Honor their heartbreak and courage they unfold for what may have been hidden, can now be told. Cashew writers are lightly roasted and salty but never do I find their poems boring or faulty. Cashew poets are artists, painting like Descartes. Their palettes laden with deep colorful thoughts, not simply to be amusing, but are often confusing I satirize in pun of those who hide behind pretense, but I admire cashews and come to their defense. Pecans are hard nuts but worth the time to crack. Some turned rancid, their hard hulls molded black. I take no pleasure of any measure from those whose words are transparent and overly exposed. I prefer to read poems that are like sweetmeats, sonnets and verses, served to us as poetic treats, written by hands choosing not to conceal emotions that reveal tenderness and depth of love's devotion. What kind of nut is it, who always seems to think some poets posting here are wasting time and ink? They feel their poems should be crowned "the best." Please, you haughty criticizing boasters, give it a rest. Some poets here could eat your scrawls for dinner, leaving you in tears, thinking you should be the winner. You are the PS peanuts, nigglers of the kitchen lot. No peanuts have ever added flavor to the soup pot. I've been hearing that there are nutty, naughty trolls who like jumping into blogs and taking control. Nuts who lie in anticipation beneath the bridge, to harass and beleaguer others. This a poetry site, where blogs shouldn't be used to attack or fight. Bullies swim in packs, with quips they think are clever. Feeding off each other is not a constructive endeavor. Poets should be able to post without reservation of comments that may cause them grief or frustration. It's ok if you think my opinion doesn't count for much because I've cooked in this kitchen using a crutch. I've slipped a few times and fallen but I got back up with helping hands of friends when I was banged up. We should be supportive, so call me a nut, and I'll say, "Thanks a bunch for noticing. That makes my day." Some will shake a finger at me in angry derision, and that's ok, too. It's a matter of subjective vision. I'm saying what some poets feel needs to be said, "We don't feed the egos of those who want to be fed."

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Date: 7/27/2024 3:43:00 PM
Lin, a great poem, the soup just seems to taste a little nuttier these days.
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Date: 7/27/2024 11:32:00 AM
It seems nothing much has changed since you wrote this Lin, sadly there's been a big decline of late. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/27/2024 2:34:00 PM
That seems to be the sad truth, Tom. Thanks for commenting over your weekend.
Date: 7/26/2024 3:27:00 PM
ooh Lin you forgot about the green 'kernels' who believe all the BS lol - wish they could see what we have over they years and the number of poets who have left as a result ... I will say no more:-( hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2024 4:53:00 PM
ahhh, Jan. Those who are wise to the ways of the BSers see it with their own eyes, and that's far better than words any of us could say. Preaching peace is talking the talk but not walking the walk. Excuse me for using that old saying but it certainly fits.
Date: 7/26/2024 11:39:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write. I feel we are here to write good words/to learn how to write better/to make our readers happy. Kids are kids. Adults are adults. I know some adults that are still acting like kids. So Sad. Words are very powerful. Both good ones/bad ones. Why hurt someone when you can put a smile on their face? "Smiles" are free so give them away. "Smiles" To You... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away....................
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2024 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so very much for always being supportive of PS poets, Paula.
Date: 7/26/2024 9:19:00 AM
I never seen this one before Lin, probably was written before I brought my nuts and bolts into the mix, but it’s definitely as relevant today as I assume it was 7 years ago, especially too those nuts still making childish quips in the blogs and comments boxes, trying to look big, when all the time just seeking some egotistical validation, this one is still every bit original, and hard hitting as it ever was, cheers David
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2024 9:29:00 AM
David, if we were playing charades, I'd have my index finger on the tip of my nose and another pointing at you for being correct. Poets are the nuts and bolts of any poetry site. A few loose ones can cause havoc if not taken to task. Thank you for recognizing the issue needs attention, and not they kind they want.
Date: 7/26/2024 7:58:00 AM
You can never know how much I love this up dated re post Lin - I guess I am as nutty as a fruitcake lol but my poop poems are appreciated by some on soup. guess we are a mixed bag of nuts here lol but the bitter nuts can just rot as far as I am concerned. hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2024 3:28:00 PM
I also write the odd serious piece too Lin which is a lot more than some who just re post old poems in an attempt to justify why they are here! hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2024 8:40:00 AM
Your poetry of every sort is appreciated by many poets here, Jan. You may write what is considered off color to some, but you certainly make ps a more colorful place. Thanks, sweet friend.

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