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An Eve Roper Contest: Nursery Rhymes 7 Written 11 Sept 24
Soap bubbles float through August breeze as children sneak in hushed delight, where fables reel 'neath maple trees to glide away like jewels bright. Now listen...elves and wizards hop their peek-a-boos enhancing games in dreamy land where stars eavesdrop; creating tricks with playful names. Here, fancy of new summer rings when kiddies dance, "let bubbles flow", while clear froths pop through dusk which sings before day ends their treat, aglow!

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Date: 9/30/2024 2:23:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Nursery Rhyme write again. The kids will enjoy reading this one. Have a great day with your win..................
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Date: 9/22/2024 6:56:00 AM
A very delightful and captivating rhyme for all children my dearest poet sis. I'm sure all kids will love and enjoy this as much as adults do (like me). An excellent and precious collection in a rhyme book, too. I enjoyed a lot. Many Thanks. Have a wonderful new week ahead. Hugs
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Date: 9/12/2024 4:34:00 AM
Dear Nette, I loved how you brought a little more summer back into our lives. I loved all your images, metaphors and sensory aspects. A nice way to say good bye to the memories of Summer. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/11/2024 9:04:00 PM
This poem not only glows, it sparkles and shines, Nette. Wonderful phantasmagoric nursery rhyme. Love it! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 9/11/2024 7:03:00 PM
Your way with personifying things in nature is what stands out for me the most dear nette! Loving the imagery and flow of this adorable and magical rhyme! I especially love “ Now listen...elves and wizards hop their peek-a-boos enhancing games in dreamy land where stars eavesdrop; creating tricks with playful names.” just stunning! Everything about this is soul warming! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/11/2024 10:08:00 AM
Enchanting...could almost hear the laughter of children
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Date: 9/11/2024 12:05:00 AM
Very cute loved this!
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Date: 9/10/2024 12:20:00 PM
A lovely nursery rhyme that flows so well..
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Date: 9/10/2024 9:56:00 AM
I can picture your fairy tale! Very nice, Nette!
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Date: 9/10/2024 9:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Nursery Rhyme write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away...............
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