Nuns

This side of our earth Opens its doors to the sun In the fields walk nuns ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kolkata, 02/05/2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/3/2016 12:45:00 PM

This haiku says more than meets the eye at first glance, Probir...I like it! My cousin was a nun and she worked for many years in India looking after orphaned children. Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/3/2016 11:37:00 PM

Thanks and regards Paul. Obviously the word nuns is a subjective metaphor. I have never read such use before. Of course I haven't read much either. Looking at the emerging morning, nuns stepped in my perception and the camera took them in...

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/2/2016 4:11:00 PM

Such a nice vision, Probir. I went to Catholic schools through grade and part of high school in a very beautiful country setting, and I did see scenes like this, especially in those days when they wore habits. These days, most dress in regular clothes, at least here. I enjoyed your Haiku. Sandra

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2016 8:56:00 PM

Thank you. Glad at the way you associate....

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/2/2016 12:21:00 PM

Delightful 3 lines Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2016 12:34:00 PM

Thank you Lenny...