Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Numpty Trumpty - Parody of Humpty Dumpty

Numpty Trumpty plans to build a brick wall
Will it be his election downfall
As all the bricklayers and all the tradesmen
Have vowed not to lay a brick ever again!

05~19~17

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Tania Kitchin June 24, 2018 at 4:13 PM Very funny, love this! Jan Allison June 24, 2018 at 4:13 PM Thanks Tania:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler May 21, 2017 at 9:23 AM I find this man pathetic. He's a nude exhibitionist who lives in a glass house, to expose what everyone knows he lacks as a real man. Enjoyed your poem. / M Jan Allison May 21, 2017 at 11:13 AM Oh so true Maurice I love that description of him I am sure he would tweet about it if he did live in a glass house and of course he would have no where to hide!:-(hugs jan xx

Verlecia Fields May 21, 2017 at 8:45 AM the poem made me wonder if i can trust the judgement of the many men :'( Jan Allison May 21, 2017 at 11:11 AM I don't think you can trust the judgement of this one and his tweets - what a way to run the USA via social media!:-9 hugs Jan xx

Robert Johnson May 20, 2017 at 8:41 PM The sooner he falls off that wall the better. This country and for that matter as you said in your comment to Arthur, the world needs a better representative. Thanks for reading my limerick and glad it gave you a chuckle. Jan Allison May 21, 2017 at 8:44 AM It is a worrying time across the world and I've yet to see Trump make a positive difference to the US -I agree the US could do with a better representative but he got voted in by the people:-( hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath May 20, 2017 at 10:45 AM Ha ha haaaa.... You have done amazingly. Good luck in the contest my dear lovely friend. A 7. Loved always, bl Jan Allison May 20, 2017 at 1:06 PM Just for fun not for a contest BL :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 20, 2017 at 10:00 AM Way to go Jan! The sad thing is this tweet keeps showering us with bricks, and umbrellas are mighty inefficient as protection:) Amitiés Jan Allison May 20, 2017 at 1:07 PM I can't believe he spends his time sending out information by tweet - he is a twit!:-( hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso May 19, 2017 at 10:20 PM So funny, great write! Jan Allison May 20, 2017 at 1:07 PM Thanks Arthur - its a worrying time for the world with Trump in power, Brexit and the forthcoming UK elections - who knows what will happen next:-( hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet May 19, 2017 at 8:12 PM Numpty Trumpty is in a lot of trouble it seems, for all of Washington's statesmen can't make him stop tweeting, just how foolish he's been. Nice little dig at Trumps ineptness. Emile. Jan Allison May 20, 2017 at 1:09 PM I agree with you Emile and informing the world through social media may be part of his downfall it certainly isn't the way I thought he would behave:-( hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie May 19, 2017 at 7:28 PM now you said something then....that dude gonna get his rear kicked in....and then he's gonna be s*** out of luck....what that commercial say, i've fallen and i cant get up....lmao....you did that jan....;) Jan Allison May 20, 2017 at 1:10 PM Glad I made you smile Eric:-) He sure isn't the most popular President is he!!!:-( hugs Jan xx

Joseph May May 19, 2017 at 6:24 PM Lol... It would be a great fall ...nice one Jan Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 6:28 PM It sure would Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty May 19, 2017 at 6:08 PM Trump always makes me think of my Dad He used to Trump and it used to Pen and Ink and said take bid sniffs it goes quicker Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 6:28 PM Yes I also call a fart a trump - I think its mainly a British term lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray May 19, 2017 at 5:42 PM I misread election Jan.......silly me. Arthur Vaso May 19, 2017 at 10:20 PM The Irish and Scots both have 1 track minds!!! :) Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 6:27 PM ha ha ha behave Jean then again erection would fit in too within the contest of the poem lol!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands May 19, 2017 at 4:27 PM LOL that is funny Jan :) Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 4:54 PM Glad I made you smile Heidi I am so thankful I don't live in the US:-) hugs Jan xx

Eye Truth-Teller May 19, 2017 at 4:22 PM haha funny Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 4:53 PM Thank you Eye Truth Teller:-) hugs jan xx

Old Man Emu May 19, 2017 at 3:49 PM Nicely done Jan, gave me a bit of a smile, over here is Australia. Kind regards, Craig Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 4:53 PM Thanks so much - glad you don't have your head buried in the sand Craig:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen May 19, 2017 at 3:48 PM - :)))) ... the best today, Jan !!! - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 4:52 PM LOL Anne Lise :-) I have seen some lovely poems this is just a parody on the nursery rhyme but the theme fits it so well lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green May 19, 2017 at 3:03 PM This was funny Jan, though I don't necessarily agree, still it was funny. Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 3:10 PM I appreciate there will be those who do support him who won't like the poem but I personally think he should be breaking down barriers not building walls:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong May 19, 2017 at 2:54 PM I love this Jan! Germany had a wall....look how great that turned out! We taxpayers will get stuck with the bill and his broken promises! Great Limerick Jan! ; ) 7 Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 2:57 PM I hope it never gets built at all Connie no good will come from it just harm - he should be trying to break down barriers not put up brick walls!:-( hugs jan xx

Lin Lane May 19, 2017 at 2:41 PM I can hardly stand to look at that face. The wall... brick, tin, iron, or whatever, will never serve as a barrier. It just as soon be made of paper. Great parody, Jan. Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 2:56 PM Thanks Lin - I have friends in the States who think he is the best thing since sliced bread and others who absolutely abhor him. Glad I am over here and can sit on the fence so to speak:-) hugs Jan xx