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Nuit Magicque

Nuit Magicque You, so young, you sparkled as a night star. Emanating celestial warmth so bright. What fates sent me to you, that magic noir? My heart split in two, when you were in sight. How faint, when you came in my direction. Dark eyes, immediately hypnotized. Body, yours, sculptured to divine perfection. This moment in time, keeps me mesmerized. Never in that eternal moment sought, To become thy lover in all my days. From the Muses, a lesson I was taught. In another's affection, you took your ways. Ah, but Aphrodite to the rescue. Brought you back for a second rendezvous!                          April 27, 2020  Midnight

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Date: 9/1/2020 8:13:00 AM
This my friend is truly a poet's poet sonnet.. I applaud this as is it's just due. Exceptional verses and depths, with wonderful flow. Certainly a true gem and a very fine fav too.. God bless...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2020 8:49:00 AM
No flogging needed my dear friend. Continue on as you are now doing. As your poetry inspires many of us. Your insight is to be greatly admired... Your poetry is too.. God bless..
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/1/2020 8:24:00 AM
Hello Robert, You know how much I admire your work! Thank you for your support since I came here. I doubted my abilities then, and even more so now. Unlike you, who has decades of experience and without a doubt the poet's poet. I have reached my end. No use in flogging a dead horse. Thank you for FAV-ing this. Merci. Panagiota xx
Date: 8/29/2020 12:08:00 AM
So delicate and beautiful and lovely.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/29/2020 5:35:00 AM
Good day Caren,mi thought I could not write one. I did long ago.But someone insulted me,so I stopped? I like the sonnet form. Thanks! Love, Pangie xx Thanks
Date: 8/27/2020 7:58:00 AM
Really idyllic, romantique, wonderful work dear Panagiota,,, salute alkas
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/27/2020 12:08:00 PM
Alkas! So overjoyed you like this, my friend! Obrigado, Panagiotaxx
Date: 8/27/2020 1:45:00 AM
- This was beautiful, Panagiota ... I enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/27/2020 3:50:00 AM
Anne-Lise, heel and hugs to you, so far away. I am so very glad you liked this. I think I shall work on more sonnets Panagiota xx
Date: 8/27/2020 12:59:00 AM
Very romantic Panagiota, well written sonnet. Greetings from Wales. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/27/2020 1:08:00 AM
Hi Tom in Wales.. Romantic is no biggie for me, doing the sonnet was! I have been delaying writing one. Hurrah, I did it. Be Blessed! Pangie!

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