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Nuclear Weapon

There was an old chap from Toledo

Who took meds for his bad libido

One pill made him fast!

Two pills helped him last!

With three, he surpassed a torpedo !!



            



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Haight Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:33 PM
This was so funny, Carrie! Congrats on your stand-alone First Place! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Great funny Limerick, Carrie, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written clever limerick!
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:02 PM
APPLAUSE from the peanut gallery!! THis is FANTASTIC, Carrie. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Hinshaw Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Carrie, I love great lims and this is a Great one indeed, most worthy of that lst place win! Thx for your kind comments re my win as well - Bob H
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:26 PM
A winner for sure! So funny ;D Congratulations Carrie! xomo :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:43 PM
OMG Carrie! This is really hilarious! I see why you won First place, deservedly so! Congratulations! I have to fave this clever Limerick! : )
Devonshire Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Oh, such an image we get! Great work, Carrie. Congrats on your first-place win. Well deserved.
Callus Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Excellent, Carrie:):) Love your humor! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Very good Carrie, congratulations...
Canerdy Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Congrats on your well-deserved 1st place win, Carrie! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:13 AM
LOL! Very funny, Carrie! Congrats!
Talbot Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Since, met that man from Toledo... He told me how much I would need too buy a few pills... without affecting my bills... whilst still fixing my failing libido... _____________________________________ Congratulations on your first place win! The pills worked, you should see my grin... At a dollar a pill... OMG what a thrill... Twenty-four seven, ring a ding, ding, DING!
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:48 AM
Fun limerick, Carrie. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Warrior Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:12 AM
Well done Carrie...congrats are in order...now, where can I get me some of those meds lol...^WW^
Y. Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:27 AM
Hi Carrie, You've penned such a good limerick. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:53 AM
Many congrats on your top spot Carrie, so wonderful to read this again:-) hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 10:08 PM
This is so cute Carrie, I can see why it took top honors in Andrea's contest. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Merryman Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Great limerick, Carrie! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Sooooo funny a well deserving winner! Jan x
Roberts Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 2:54 AM
well done Carrie....Seren
Johnson Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Doesn't get any better than rhyming those three words. Congrat's and much appreciate the wonderful humor.
Gorelick Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 12:14 PM
This one is so funny..glad you got top billing ( as usual). Congrats...BG
Fisher Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 10:49 AM
This is the bomb, Carrie! Congrats on the win.
Smith Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Now this is funny..Congrats on the win.....Tim
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