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Np My Snoring Wife

noise pollution
breaking night's silence...
sleepless hours

a roaring engine...
beside me
my snoring wife

a ticking clock
competing with...
the snoring sound

who will win?
let me see...
sleepless judge

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/25/2012 7:09:00 PM

I know the feeling and I'm just as bad. We snore in stereo.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/5/2012 5:54:00 PM

I had a blissful snorer of my own once. Had to move into another room and put a pillow over my ears to get any sleep. He slept through it all. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2012 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~Susan's~ "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 1/4/2012 8:19:00 AM

lol...........loved it!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/3/2012 10:02:00 PM

again, you rock kashi.. heelarious!... happy congrats on the super win! :) huggs!

Greg Stanley

Date: 1/3/2012 9:33:00 PM

Nicely done, congratulations on your win, Greg

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/16/2011 2:28:00 PM

Kashi, you can be so funny! A roaring engine set me laughing. I love it and just hope it isn't quite true!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/15/2011 5:45:00 PM

For a poet who gets LITTLE SLEEP you sure write superbly! This is a fab entry for the contest. I wonder if the judge will judge better with less sleep just as you write well with little? Hmm....time will tell....tick...tick...tick...tick....Gwendolen

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/15/2011 10:22:00 AM

brilliant, Kash, touching on a very sensitive topic here at my place. if for the contest good luck. harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/15/2011 7:58:00 AM

hehe, this reminds me of my mom and dad.. They can't decide who snores the loudest ;) enjoyed your wit Kash ;) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2011 8:55:00 PM

now why does everyone around her tell lies in their poems? hahaha. when I write about my snoring husband, THat is NO joke. Don't worry, Kash, I've got two other guys telling me in soupmails that what I believed was true in their poetry was just made up stories! Anyway, you sure did a great poem with that theme.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2011 5:35:00 PM

VERY clever, sleepless judge, I LOVE that. I bet you snore too, Kash. All my sisters and I snore but our DAD beats us all. hahaha.

Greg Stanley

Date: 12/14/2011 1:35:00 PM

Very very nice, I can relate as my wife tells me I snore - so perhaps she feels the same. Best of luck in the contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2011 12:48:00 PM

I love this one, Kash! I once had to share a hotel room with my sister and her husband. She had told me about his snoring, but most of the time snoring doesn't keep me awake. Once my brother-in-law fell asleep, the entire room vibrated. No wonder my sister chooses to sleep on the couch when she's at home. Great entry for the contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn