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Now Voyager

fragile is the dream...
sailing over broken glass
without a compass


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Posted My First Poem 5/2008
Image # 8
For Skat's Contest: "Glass Haiku"

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Space Cadet

August 28, 2016 at 7:48 PM

Beautiful. W

Jan Allison

June 6, 2016 at 5:44 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Carrie I knew this would do well for you:-) hugs jan xx

Seosamh De Burca

June 5, 2016 at 7:58 PM

Fab, congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

June 5, 2016 at 5:36 PM

Great! Congratulations!

Edward Ebbs

June 5, 2016 at 4:31 PM

Dealing with fragile glass without a compass is complicated, dream or no dream...Congrats Carrie on your win!

Sandra Haight

June 5, 2016 at 1:19 PM

Carrie, congratulations on your Premiere Contest trophy win! Love your Haiku. Hugs, Sandra

Charlie Smith

June 5, 2016 at 11:51 AM

A wonderful and well deserved win Carrie, congratulations...

John Lawless

June 5, 2016 at 11:22 AM

Congrats on the top spot Carrie. This is a beautifully poetic restating of the old lament...."up the creek without a paddle".

Bl Devnath

June 5, 2016 at 10:36 AM

A great congrats on your win with this beautiful haiku my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2016 at 10:13 AM

this was my pick for best one as well. BIG congrats, Carrie. wish I had thought of it

Richard Lamoureux

June 5, 2016 at 8:33 AM

What a wonderful piece! Congrats!

Joanna Daniel

June 5, 2016 at 8:14 AM

An excellent haiku and a well deserved winner:) Congratulations, Carrie:)

Barbara Gorelick

June 4, 2016 at 11:16 PM

Love, love it! Congrats on your big win. BG

Skat A

June 4, 2016 at 11:01 PM

Carrie, CONGRATULATION! On your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog " Objects Of Beauty" and celebrate your win if you'd like. This was a very enjoyable contest, a tough one to judge at the very end. Love **SKAT**

Skat A

June 4, 2016 at 10:58 PM

Hello, Carrie, May I be the first to congratulate you on this terrific win. I'm not much of a haiku-ist. But, I sure know what I like and enjoy. This entry was perfect........ SKAT LOVE

Sara Kendrick

May 31, 2016 at 6:10 PM

Very good work..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..I think this is very creative indeed..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara