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Now the lamplight flickers

I’ve bloomed well past blossom season, no fleshy pink 
petals here. Wrinkles appear now. Feet left by crow. You 
see the grey in the brown, see a patch of scalp showing.
You see the change in my gait, see my once brisk pace 
slowing. But what you don’t see is me: I am no longer 
desirable, desired, nor worth a smile, a glance from afar.
I’ve grown out of season, a dead drink left atop bar.  I cling 
to youthful glow for that is when you saw me. Now the 
lamplight flickers, the bulb is on its last. A livewire fuse close 
to short. As I pass, you might see a shoulder hunched, an 
eye cast down. You see hands that surely once held a lover’s, 
lips that had stories to tell. But that clock is ticking and so 
you turn. And what you don’t see is me. I’ve written words 
you might read, taught things you might learn; once, you 
saw me dancing under club lights, saw me whoosh by on 
rollercoasters. But that hand is moving, and you’re conscious 
that time wants to flee. You see a body, a person, a 
frame with history. But what you don’t see is me.

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Date: 5/31/2025 9:14:00 AM
Dear Thomas, your poem is exquisite in it's use of rich imagery and soulful metaphor. I especially adored the haunting repetition and melancholy of "what you don’t see is me" - so impactful throughout and as a poignant and memorable finale. The emotions and realizations of aging are so beautifully captured. Congratulations for your success in Rob's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/13/2025 6:56:00 PM
"a frame with history"-- well done and congrats.
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