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Now Is Next To Nothing Compared To Where I'Ve Been

A poem based upon the quote: "Now is next to nothing compared to where I've been." -Rod McKuen Lately there have been chances not taken…memories unforgotten…tearing my soul into tiny pieces rushing my beliefs toward yesterday’s blues….but… -now is next to nothing compared to where I've been. I fall sleep in dreams and dream with eyes wide open. Demons followed me into a life of dependency upon people and chemicals I was born to deal with. I bled my veins just to feel and I felt just to heal….but… -now is next to nothing compared to where I've been. Tears flow and babies cry and all I can think about is where I need to be. I live in a town beneath two rocks. One rock was my laughter and smiles and I lived with surprising fantasies coming true. The other rock broke my back and turned me into a monster rough enough to have poor reliance's…but… -now is next to nothing compared to where I've been. I used to be filthy and uprooted between entwined thorns of dead roses bleeding into the soil. My addictions persuaded my brain into carrying a need for pain and punishment. My mistakes are my own and I own my mistakes. I only know this because… -now is next to nothing compared to where I've been. Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: April 9, 2016

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Date: 4/15/2016 5:49:00 PM
Love this, Laura Loo. I came here to see how you do your prose since it is not a form I employ very often and I want to try your contest. I think this is a contest that was tailor made for someone like Constance. She does so well with this kind of poetry. and you do too!!!
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Date: 4/16/2016 4:37:00 PM
thank you Andrea, you are so sweet, I'm sure your prose is beautiful...:)-luloo
Date: 4/10/2016 2:58:00 AM
You are inspirational LuLoo - you write so openly and honestly about the issues in your past and those of your sister - keep on spilling the ink it is so cathartic my friend:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 4/10/2016 10:13:00 AM
thank you Jan :)-luloo
Date: 4/10/2016 1:04:00 AM
Very deep write Laura and so very well written, thank you for sharing this one I really enjoyed it!
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Date: 4/10/2016 10:13:00 AM
thank you Brian very much!-luloo :)
Date: 4/9/2016 10:15:00 PM
Wonderful write Laura.
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Date: 4/10/2016 10:12:00 AM
thank you Lenny:)-luloo
Date: 4/9/2016 9:35:00 PM
"I live in a town beneath two rocks"...nice line. You've reached above the clouds with this piece of writing Laura. The rainbows always appear once the storm has passed, as I believe you well know. J.
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Date: 4/10/2016 10:11:00 AM
thank you J for always popping in and leaving wonderful comments :)-luloo

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