Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep

Flutterfluffing of downy goose
rocks tempest princess port-starboard.
Bed tiers for bride-to-be.  Steep steps
of ladder, up t’ward skylight, soared.

Twenty tidal wave mattresses.
Jacky’s seed sprouts into beanstalk.
Ripples of corpulent stitching -
siren depths that bruise like bedrock.

Schlepping sleep on stone-wet pillows.
Won’t Gorgo* make a gorgeous bride?
Honeybuzz of beehive tangles.
The slip and slide of nightmare ride.

The feasible mother-in-law
conjured guest into blue-sea room.
Testing of oars and humpback whale.
Full moon is gold and so is groom.

Oh how this royal navigates.
She’s the sunrise, light as feather.
The salty air will pinch her cheeks.
She’s survived balmier weather.

1/21/2021
Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep
Sponsor: Craig Cornish 

*Gorgo - Medusa

Poem a tribute to fairytale: The Princess and the Pea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/2/2021 11:35:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win. So many stunning images in your tribute.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2021 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 2/2/2021 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful and cute story/write. It was a fun read. Have a blessed day with your win..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2021 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 2/2/2021 1:04:00 AM
Congrats Kim, very creative, really out of the box and fantastic
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2021 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara!
Date: 2/1/2021 3:42:00 PM
Love it Kim. Just perfect! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 2/1/2021 3:34:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win, Vienna is right you took a different way of writing the poem. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 2/1/2021 11:24:00 AM
You have taken a rather unique approach to the contest, mesmerizing verse Kim, congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic!
Date: 1/22/2021 1:14:00 PM
Come on now, Kim. Flutterfluffing must only be in the dictionary under the name Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 4:37:00 PM
LOL! Hugs :)
Date: 1/22/2021 3:14:00 AM
I wish I knew the fairytales...but it has been such a long long while.. Time proves that some memories are lost. I should re-read them. God bless you with a win, dear friend. Love and prayers
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 4:26:00 AM
I used to read them. Thank you and God bless, dear one.
Date: 1/22/2021 1:47:00 AM
Love your take on that classic fairy tale Kim, Good luck and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 4:26:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 1/21/2021 10:53:00 PM
Sleeping with Gorgo is fatal. She'd turn him to stone. Lovely poem. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 4:25:00 AM
LOL. Of course she’s not really Gorgo, just uncomfortable and dreaming.
Date: 1/21/2021 7:32:00 PM
I wonder if either the Princess or the Pea would recognize this astounding re-do! You have certainly re-upped them and then some! Awesome tribute, Kim. Wow! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2021 7:34:00 PM
Thanks so much! God bless you!
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