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Now a Mall Walker

In my wildest dreams, never thought I'd be one But I'm now a mall walker, my life's come undone Mostly seventy or older No kids on our shoulders Decrepit but still cookin' before we succumb © Jack Ellison 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 12/17/2015 4:40:00 PM

Jack I applaud you for walking my friend it is good for you.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2015 5:42:00 PM

Gotta keep the OLD bod movin'!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/11/2015 3:37:00 PM

I once was a mall walker... But they all closed and that was a shocker... So now with a chair I'm a rocker... But when it hits my cats tail he's a squawker... Which made me feel like a terrible mother...

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/11/2015 5:25:00 PM

Said I would NEVER be one BUT here I am!!! LOL xoxox

Tim Smith

Date: 12/10/2015 4:14:00 PM

If you're tired don't you fret...just sit in front of Victoria Secret...watch them girls...some in curls...and pick the one's you haven't met

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/11/2015 6:38:00 AM

Aha! You are talking from experience methinks!!! LOL

Judy Konos

Date: 12/10/2015 8:56:00 AM

Ahhhhh as only Jack Ellison could say it...wow......thanks

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/10/2015 10:42:00 AM

At my advanced age, a lot of my fellow walkers are just young'uns! CRAP!!!! xoxox