November's Rose

Fallen frost its dew point laden
Holds the rose as a fair maiden
Briskly touching her petals spice
Forging magic in dewdrops ice
Paused unwrapping her coat open
Her pageant exposed and woken

Upon the snow where rains commenced
She reached so brave her life expensed 
The cold did bite and roots did freeze
Just one last thrust her beauty pleased
These eyes cast on crimson in white
Would she make it through the long night?

I plucked her there a saving grace
It put a smile upon my face
To see splendor endure such strife
An icy grave not halting life
So in a vase I placed her well
To keep alive this sweet noel

November 25, 2020

Lay November Poetry Contest
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Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:07 PM
Ahh!! The last rose of summer so well described. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:12 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Lonna (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
George   Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Absolutely beautiful, and sure to be on the winner's list, dear Lonna. ~ Elaine
Blodgett Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Elaine I truly appreciate your comments. Thanks Lonna
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