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Brave is the rose caught in November’s thorn While she endures nights of chill and snow, Awaiting gold daylight's warmth to bestow--- And liven her frame…her mouth drooped, forlorn. Gently, new moon peeps into kohl of eve While its luster reflects on this bud , soft Like a pubescent ovule held aloft By elms guarding her round shape NOT to cleave. Though one kind-hearted owl perches nearby Mutely disapproving this ghastly tread… An obscure fog sprays crystals overhead Instead, wings lock against nip of the sky. How unwavering…in her innocence Morning rises, its lucent gleam so young That frozen dusk pales with wheezes unsung… Oh, grit of a rose saved by providence! Written 9/10/2018 Contest of Broken Dream Enclosed Rhyme - September, 2018

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Date: 10/2/2018 3:09:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely write ~
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Date: 10/1/2018 6:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and metaphors used in your lovely poem, Nette. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/30/2018 9:54:00 PM
The silky softness of your verses and the beauty of your imagery always leaves me in awe, Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:11:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Nette, congrats on you win. John
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Date: 9/30/2018 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on your high placement xxoo
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Date: 9/29/2018 10:12:00 PM
I was right, it is a deserving winner! Congratulations Nette! : )
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Date: 9/29/2018 7:00:00 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/20/2018 1:34:00 PM
Hello Nette,the rose a beautiful flower. Will always return to the earth in full bloom. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/16/2018 1:54:00 PM
A lovely entry Nette. I found this form challenging. This will be on the winner's list I predict. : )
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Date: 9/15/2018 7:21:00 PM
Nice poem and nice image to go with it. The seasons come and go an we look on at the remnants of former seasons With hope in our hearts... Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/12/2018 9:29:00 PM
Beautifully written, Nette. Your poetry is awesome! Good luck in the contest...huggs Charlie
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Date: 9/12/2018 12:25:00 PM
Words of poetic beauty, my friend...sure to win nette...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:53:00 AM
Wow, thanks for the new, "Fav", Nette. My roses are usually blooming in the Fall, as well and I have had one or two looking like the one in the photo. Well done with super imagery.
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Date: 9/11/2018 3:53:00 PM
I can visualize this in lights already Nette! Astounding beauty! : )
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Date: 9/11/2018 3:41:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Nette. Your poetry always seems to flow so smoothly and makes me sigh each and every time.
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Date: 9/11/2018 6:33:00 AM
Not many roses survive the cold.. love the imagery...
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