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November Rolls, Aka, a November Rose

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November Rolls (Matching Rhyming Scheme of aabbcc per stanza...) (a) Cascading steps my day will start, (a) pictures abound parades by heart, (b) sprung to brightness startle on course, (b) each day remembered gifts the source, (c) hop amid blossom hues cool breeze, (c) lengthy well-mannered gist to seize. (a) Sun aged life we patterned eyes chart, (a) spews golden way smooth work of art, (b) till such realms-edge frequent divorce, (b) air Harvest moon inspires white horse, (c) dawdle, impaled leaves clear appease, (c) crumpled neath feet, flit time at ease. (a) Northern brisk befell trails winds dart, (a) as powdered field draped milk impart, (b) thy countenance embrace the coarse, (b) midst pending views November force, (c) fitted well clothed this cloudy squeeze, (c) terms sway o'er life till wintry's freeze. (...and so on...) *Used: HMS 2020 October 21

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Date: 11/14/2020 9:07:00 PM
Great example, William, I hope I am able to do. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/14/2020 9:12:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, I tried the 'Westie' like Sam but I missed the call, mayhaps next time--Ah! 'Tis a shoo-in for you my friend, Aloha!
Date: 10/27/2020 8:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. So delightful from the start till the end... serving likewise as an example of what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Date: 10/27/2020 8:52:00 PM
Blessings always, Beata, as your musing awaits, Aloha! William
Date: 10/26/2020 10:12:00 AM
So! November flows. Sure to try your contest. Blessing
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Date: 10/26/2020 4:41:00 PM
Hope I made it clear, Anisha, good musing, Aloha! William
Date: 10/24/2020 11:25:00 PM
oh I wish I had seen this first. I was thinking the rhyme scheme could be a new aabbcc per stanza . Guess I need to do a redo!!(I never posted mine yet but just noticed your blog. thanks for this model!
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Date: 10/25/2020 12:21:00 AM
Thank you for your vigilance, Andrea, I will further clarification, Aloha! William
Date: 10/22/2020 8:57:00 AM
William, your poem is quite wonderful and a great example for your contest _Constance
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Date: 10/22/2020 10:30:00 AM
Thank you truly, Constance, may you be blessed, Aloha! William
Date: 10/22/2020 6:03:00 AM
what a lovely example to inspire us William:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/22/2020 10:27:00 AM
I am grateful, Jan, blessings to you, Aloha! William
Date: 10/22/2020 3:49:00 AM
A lovely November write... God bless you and thank you for the example
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Date: 10/22/2020 4:20:00 AM
My thanks be unto you, Regina, blesseth always, Aloha! William

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