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November In Delhi - India

November is best month of year Winter begins, new year is near It is time to enjoy the sun Go for walks in afternoon sun Most people seen sitting in sun Eating nuts and chatting is fun It becomes dark outside too soon Time to finish work before moon At night really cool winds blow Temperature is very low Nights spent at home with heater on Water cold geyser always on Bed time in blanket thick and warm Cold weather surrounds in full form In morning hot drink is a must For bathing hot water is must In cold water body is numb Unable to move, you feel dumb Date: 10/27/2020 8 syllabus count per line checked at poetry soup syllabus counter

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Date: 12/9/2020 10:10:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Years ago when I was a child sometimes the water would be frozen in the bucket in the kitchen so I am relate to the cold water. Sara
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/11/2020 2:57:00 AM
Thanks and same to you too. Have a great day ahead friend. Take care Rama
Date: 12/3/2020 12:06:00 AM
Good job Rama!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/3/2020 3:14:00 AM
Thanks learning new forms from every contest. Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day ahead friend. Take care, Rama
Date: 12/2/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Rama (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/3/2020 3:11:00 AM
To err is human otherwise we will be God. Thanks for the contest and placement, learnt a new poetic form. Aloha( checked the meaning of this word. Great meaning) Have a blessed day ahead. Regards Rama.
Date: 11/4/2020 2:15:00 PM
I have spent winter in November and December in Delhi! Freezing!!!! And the fog! smog! A nice poem to give us a glimpse of ND!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/4/2020 9:59:00 PM
Thanks. In mumbai after marriage. Suddenly Delhi winter yaad aa gaya and phir participate kiya. Everyone only writes about autumn. Ya fog so much that nothing is visible. Clouds come down to earth.
Date: 10/29/2020 5:23:00 PM
Ha, ha! Don't want a numb body, that's for sure. Enjoyed this glimpse into November in New Delhi. Thanks, Rama. Warm wishes, Gershon
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/30/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by to comment. Take care Rama

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