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A November Ninette Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich 11/07/2023

 

November

                             Dark
                         cold days,
                   white mornings.
                 November month
                will turn a sad page
                      to a cheerful
                     year's season
                     snowed with
                            glow
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Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Thank you so much Sara. Blessings!
Fowler Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:08 PM
What a nice way of depicting the closing of November and joyfulness of December. Congratulations Maria! :)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Thank you very much Linda. I appreciate your nice comment. Have a nice eveningxxx
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Thats a really gorgeous picture you’ve used here for this poem, and i love the way your ninette flows and the way you woven words so seamlessly. So stunning. Especially love “ turn a sad page to a cheerful years season” “ snowed with glow” seasons and their changes, how it can still glow so poetically depicted. Congratulations on your win well deserved
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Hello Ink. Thank you very much for your lovely words and for stopping by. Have a great eveningxxx
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:23 PM
This is a lovely ninette on how fall brings winter. Congrats.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:40 PM
Thank you so much Andrea for your kind comment. Blessingsxxx
Buhagiar Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:04 AM
Hopefully, we will have a pleasant Christmas. Blessings
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:44 AM
We hope indeed. Thank you Victor. Blessingsxxx
Bowring Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Dear, sweet Maria what a delightful read my lovely, poetic friend. Visually, I love the shape of the poem as well and the picture pairs well with your so well written poem. Love your choice of words - such vivid imagery. I especially love the line,’ will turn a sad page’. Loved the positivity too. A real pleasure to read. Hope you are keeping well my lovely. Hugs and love to you xx
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 9:17 AM
Hello Christina. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm keeping well, thanks. I also hope you are doing ok?. Thank you so much for your lovely words. Have a great eveningxxxTake care
Baker Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 4:37 PM
Nice Ninette, Maria, a very uplifting poem. Thanks for sharing it with us, my friend in Spain. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Hello Bill. Thank you so much for your comment. We say: to face bad weather, better with a positive mind". Have a nice day my friend.xxxx
Connelly Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 4:17 PM
Wonderful Maria... Is this poem shaped like a snowflake or a Christmas tree; or am I imagining things... Thanks
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:19 AM
Hello Jeff. I've just centered it, and that's the result. It looks like a tree. You are right. Thanks a lot for your kind comment. Blessings!
Meadows Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 2:38 PM
A good poem for November. Well done.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:24 AM
Hello Jeanette. Thank you very much for stopping by. I'm glad you liked it. Blessingsxxx
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