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Notorious

I am a mage in a rage with extreme power I escape from this cage looking to devour! Determined to be victorious Poetry Soup has labeled me notorious! Not commenting on my work just to discourage me? I overcome any and all adversity! I even manage my paranoia and hallucinations; But I continue to persevere; Despite the demonic voices in my ear. I am fueled by huge doses of testosterone! So why am I to be scrutinize for my raging hormones? Don't blame me because you're sexually frustrated and all alone. Maybe you would like a naked picture of me on your Iphone? Who cares if you find me disgusting and immature. You're just unhappy and insecure. I can't stand a hypocrite and a snake; I wish you had a horrendous toothache, And it would cause you unbearable pain! I could make you beg me for a shot of novocaine! After your misery is over and you recover, You may get lucky and I'll take you as a lover! I may need a shot of Kentucky whiskey, For it to hit the spot and find you remotely sexy! You may think all this is serious, But I'm just being humorous; Because PoetrySoup has labeled me notorious!!! *Note wrote strictly for "Syed Amaan Ahmad's" contest "Free-style" You wanted creative , unique, good stuff to read;)

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Date: 10/5/2010 1:30:00 PM
A slam dunk for you, JAM! Congratulations on your awesome win in Syed's Contest! Worthy and deserving of this placement!!!! Enjoy your win, Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/5/2010 6:47:00 AM
Congratulation on second place in Amaan's contest, I got first place, yahooooo!!!!! and like Amaan said, your poem is fabulous~~
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Date: 10/4/2010 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy! This poem depicts the true feelings and how you have crafted your wrath in words....and how precisely you followed the rhythmic pattern....it was fabulous.... it was like, beauty revealed through thorns.... amazing one my friend.....you rock!
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jimmy in Syed Amaan Ahmad's contest "Free Style". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Jimmy
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:13:00 PM
I'm glad this wasn't serious Jimmy. congratulations on your 2nd place in this big contest. The winners are on page 16, I really had to look for them. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/13/2010 12:57:00 PM
Really great entry for Syed's contest Jimmy and good luck.. this free style gives us all an option to submit something unique and different ..this one looks like a winner alright.. I am great..getting ready to go on vacation with my LUV next Sunday.. for two weeks of fun and talks and quiet time... always great to hear from u my friend.. happy Sunday.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/11/2010 3:26:00 PM
Haha I love this. Nice slam, even if it isn't all that serious.
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Date: 6/10/2010 11:55:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon Jimmy. I think you just might have the winner here. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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