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Noticing

In wonderment I walk with the day billows blowing noticing not, a beginning nor an end lost in the mist of the rain I pause at the crosswalks filled with children on their way not knowing life from a game smiles yield, flowery umbrellas holding the rain and a world at bay glistened eyes overcome and I see their mothers dreams, heartfelt nights tireless songs of glee intrepidity the will amid the worry cars turning left moving right no wrong in sight the beginning to an end they're at their end I see youth in their eyes glazing over moments years/tears it's not the end I greet them noticing all that beauty bellowing silently from within

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Date: 10/13/2019 2:19:00 PM
beautiful. sad. Life. x
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Date: 10/11/2019 1:21:00 PM
I love this. Many fail to notice. Great write! And, congrats on your Feature.
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Date: 10/11/2019 6:59:00 AM
Sad the ways of mortal man. Soft blinded by papers green. His time but a brief span. Great beauty too oft unseen. Yet life offers its gifts. The Joy's of sweet love. Light and hope that uplifts. Treasure cast from above. Superb first poem you have e given us. A fav, a great POTD.
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Date: 10/9/2019 9:47:00 PM
Beautiful write my friend, Tim, always the best.. Congratulations on POTD Hugs
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Date: 10/8/2019 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, TS.
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Date: 10/6/2019 9:35:00 PM
An uplifting poem with a positive message. Brilliant! Congratulations on Poem of the Day! ~Mark
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Date: 10/6/2019 8:46:00 PM
very beautiful. I had to check out the first post made and wow, it's a potd!! Congratulations.
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Date: 10/6/2019 2:15:00 PM
- Beautifully poem, TS :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:33:00 PM
Wow! First poem posted -- Kaboom! Poem of the Day! That may just be a first. Congratulations are certainly in order for a wonderful, wondrous write! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/4/2019 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and insight, TS. This has many wonderful elements. A well-deserved POTD.
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Date: 10/4/2019 8:25:00 AM
"not knowing life from a game" This is wonderful poetry TS. Beautifyl at so many levels. I have noticed some of these things myself. So well done! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/3/2019 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor!
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Date: 10/3/2019 10:21:00 PM
Yaaaa, congratulations.TS... Perfect poetry.... Panagiota xxx
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Date: 10/3/2019 4:25:00 PM
"noticing all that beauty, lost in the mist of the rain" Yes, indeed. These two thoughts together, make my heart smile. Your entire poem is captivating. Congratulations TS Poetry, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/3/2019 3:32:00 PM
This deserves an applause. Masterful
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Date: 10/3/2019 1:07:00 PM
This is fantastic! Congratulations on your deserving POTD honor. Aloha : )
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Date: 10/3/2019 10:09:00 AM
You have written this with a discerning eye... seeing the images and looking beyond what the eye sees. Beautifully done !! Well deserved poem of the day poetry !!
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Date: 10/3/2019 9:57:00 AM
Flowery umbrellas holding the rain and a world at bay - The will amid the worry.... So many good lines. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/3/2019 8:21:00 AM
We're noticing!... Absolutely magnificent poetry...Congrats!! on POTD!! TS...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/3/2019 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 10/3/2019 7:46:00 AM
Last stanza is best. Nice potd
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Date: 10/3/2019 7:31:00 AM
Back with Congratulations! Have a terrific day TS. xomo
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Date: 10/3/2019 7:27:00 AM
Congrats on poem of the day--excellent write, TS.
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Date: 10/3/2019 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 10/3/2019 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations TS on your poem of the day
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Date: 10/3/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thanks O
Date: 10/3/2019 6:53:00 AM
What incredible free verse your imagery and observation of life is superb, adding this gem to my faves, congrats on potd and welcome to the soup bowl:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/3/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Jan, pleasure to be home
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